thirty poems number two

one branch

one branch that didn’t come home with me

one branch that stayed on its tree

one branch that slept in the snow

one branch unafraid of the dark

one fallen leaf sticking to my shoe

8 thoughts on “thirty poems number two”

Laura Bloomsbury says:

2023-04-10 at 10:39 am

you have made the litany sheer poetry

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1. neil reid says:
  
  2023-04-10 at 4:02 pm
  
  Thank you Laura. Brevity has not been one of my charms, so…
  
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Bridgette says:

2023-04-17 at 11:51 pm

So much here in such little words. What do we carry with us and what do we leave behind?

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1. neil reid says:
  
  2023-05-05 at 11:07 pm
  
  Sorry, my dumb fingers and head, clicked the wrong button to comment back the way I should. Thanks – always – you know.
  
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2. neil reid says:
  
  2023-05-06 at 2:28 pm
  
  Thank you Bridgette. Again. ❤️
  
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neil reid says:

2023-04-18 at 2:16 am

maybe as zen as I get : )

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whimsygizmo says:

2023-05-05 at 10:14 pm

Fragments left, only. Yes.

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1. neil reid says:
  
  2023-05-05 at 11:06 pm
  
  A fragment yet connects to the whole – is how I see. Thank you de.
  
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